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Nugget Of Love

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Look, I love you,

I know you know,

But I'll say it again,

Because I do.
I hate submitting short things like this, especially so simple a piece. BUT I was convinced otherwise that this 'nugget of love' was powerful left alone ^_^
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I feel this is really a nice short feeling that conveys much to the reader. As such, i feel that the bolding of words actually detracts from the poem instead of helps.

Allow your words to stand for themselves instead of feeling you need to give them added strength.